FanFic: Twist of Fate By TotalEclipse & IsabellaMCullen (T)

[tnuccio]

okay, I loved it...

so we know the scent is not the denali crew now...I'm still wondering here....also, Edward didn't smell it so maybe it's not a scent at all...something to do with her pending power? She's sensing danger of some kind....

Am I getting close...

So I had to put my review here because I didn't know I could only review once per chapter and I had to post a comment on your yummy James reference in the A/N...yum....

Great work! I loved it!

[edward's girl]

Yeah! I loved it. That was the best chapter yet.
You described things so well, it was like we were sitting there with them. Bella descibes Edward's voice perfectly:
"It felt so right. Lying closely beside Edward, listening to his velvety voice as he spoke. I wasn’t even paying attention to what he was saying. He could have been reciting the 50 states in alphabetical order and I would have been mesmerized. I had missed listening to him; his formal, turn-of-the-century phrases; his eloquence; his knowledge; the soft, alto tone of his voice. It was like listening to a classical concerto performed by a world-class orchestra, and I wanted to close my eyes and lose myself in the soothing sound of him."
AAHHHH!
The way you descibed thier silence as comfortable and unassuming, perfect.
Loved it and am ready for more...
we are never satisfied are we?

[Ambushed]

This was good. I left you an review on FF

I feel like they are really starting from a new spot now. Making things even better in the long run once they get a few things out of the way first. Like miscommunication and full out honesty!!

My new guess for the things she sensed is the volturi!! I like to guess!

[edward's girl]

I missed the James reference... a little help here!

[who knows?]

I was with who knows in a butt kicking class at the Y. Now that I can't move I'll be here in front of my computer WAITING!!!!!!!!!

I have my sparkly pink pitchfork, my MOB attire, and heck! I won't even shower!!!! Now I'm stinky too.

Just doing my part to give you an out to read fanfic all day. At least shower before your hubby gets home :wink:

If you think today was bad, wait til Emily is teaching...wait I shouldn't tell you that if I want to to come again

[mariejannette]

That was good! I was so hoping that they would kiss when the were star gazing *sigh* Can't wait for more!!

[who knows?]

so we know the scent is not the denali crew now...I'm still wondering here....also, Edward didn't smell it so maybe it's not a scent at all...something to do with her pending power? She's sensing danger of some kind....

I'm thinking the same thing...

That chapter was great. hmmmm lying beside Edward - shouldn't go there

Great job ladies, can't wait for you to give us more of this story!

[edward's girl]

I , too, have not showered yet... haha. It will happen soon though!
Yes, I vote for a kiss soon also!
more, more, more!

[kityhawk546]

I cant wait anymore, please please get it up asap. I love your story. Thanks

[tnuccio]

The James reference is in the authors note at the top of the chapter!

[Kellbelle]

Isabella that was so great.

Edward lying in the moonlight, drool , wishing Bella wanted him, drool , man I wish I were Bella at that moment....

Whoa, I can't wait to read more. My medieval torture devices are still at the ready and will use them if need be. :wink:

[kityhawk546]

That was great. I love it and as usual cant wait for more.